Friday, July 26, 2024

The Riddle of Raven's Gulch by Mary Francis Shura

The Riddle of Raven's Gulch was published by Weekly Reader Books in hardcover in 1975.  The book was also reprinted by Scholastic in softcover under the title The Riddle of Raven Hollow.  Both editions are very common.  

Summary:

The first time Bart hears that Raven's Gulch is haunted, he laughs.  After all, Bart visits the gulch every day.  His newspaper route takes him past the gulch, and his friend, old Mr. Bergen, lives right by the gulch. 

The rumors begin to bother Bart, because they taint his good feelings about his favorite place.  He decides to look into the situation.

Bart learns that a strange car has been seen near the gulch.  Neighbors have reported odd sounds and lights.  Bart sees a shadowy figure in the gulch and soon realizes that something dangerous is going on.  He must find out what it is.

Here's how Bart describes Raven's Gulch on pages 14 and 15.

Everything changes at once when you leave Maple Street.  My bike tires stop that funny singing noise that they make on pavement.  The sound is hidden and muffled as I hit the rutted road.  I can hear my canvas paper bag hit my side soft like a dog's tail wagging.  Instead of green lawns there are deep grassy pastures held back by fencing that staggers raggedly along the roadside.  Even if the sun is shining back on Maple Street, those big trees whose branches meet above the road make it seem like twilight all the time.

I figured they must have laid that road out by an animal trail because it wanders around a lot instead of going straight.  Even though it's bumped and curvy it isn't too hard to bike on because there is never any traffic to watch out for.  I can just wheel any old place in the road. 

After a couple of fenced off pastures, I come to Raven's Gulch.  Maybe it sounds silly but I always think of Raven's Gulch as being my very own place.  Sure, it  has NO TRESPASSING signs posted all along the fence, but Mr. Burgen put them up and he and I are friends.  

More times than I can remember he has told me in his heavy foreign accent, to "Pay those signs no mind."

I take him at his word, too, because there's no time of the year that Raven's Gulch isn't just great.

The spring is the loudest time.  The place is thick with birds and though they sing like everything, they can't drown out the rush of the melted snow water making that little stream into a small icy river.  All sorts of bushy plants bloom and the place is wild with bees.  

In summer I like the berries.  Nobody has ever trimmed those old blackberry brambles and they sprawl around in thorny mountains.  There is no way you can reach the inside ones (which always look the fattest and blackest) because the thorns are curved and mean.  But even just picking on the outside I get quarts and quarts of berries.  Last summer I sold twelve boxes to Mr. Kovacs at the store and took four or five pails to Mr. Burgen's housekeeper for deep dish pies.  After the berries are gone and it gets hot, I like to just sit there in the green cool by the stream and watch the slivers of minnows flicker in the dark of the water and catch tadpoles in my fingers to take home.

The author had me hooked at this point.  This excellent description gave me a reason to care.  Raven's Gulch sounded fabulous, and I wanted Bart to solve the mystery so that he could continue to enjoy his special place.

I like this remark from page 29:

"Things like that don't exist," I said, almost sounding angry without meaning to.

"What really is don't scare people," he said quietly.  "It's what they think is."

This book was written in a fashion that makes it pleasant to read.  It hits the right tone and is interesting from start to finish.  The story is pretty simple and has just 124 pages, but it reads like a series book.  I really enjoyed it.

Wednesday, July 24, 2024

Deleted Lines from Keeper of the Lost Cities Books

This post contains a spoiler from late in the series and hints at other late series spoilers.  Do not read this post unless you have read ALL of the Keeper books. 

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Back in 2020, Shannon Messenger posted deleted lines on her Instagram.  A Tumblr user compiled them.  The Tumblr posts are a handy way to see the posts at a glance without having to scroll back through years of Instagram posts.  I did exactly that just because I wanted to verify that the captured posts are from Shannon's Instagram.  And they are.

There is a lot of misinformation about this series that has been spread online between fans.  For instance, if you ask Google who Sophie's father is, Google gives a wrong answer based on a fake story someone told in an online forum.  Google even quotes the fake story, so that is how little we can trust online content about this series.  When someone says that something came from Shannon Messenger, I make certain.  I take no chances.  

Here are the Tumblr pages that compile Messenger's posts giving her deleted lines.

Exile Deleted Lines
Everblaze Deleted Lines
Neverseen Deleted Lines
Neverseen Deleted Lines Part 2
Lodestar Deleted Lines
Lodestar Deleted Lines Part 2
Nightfall Deleted Lines
Flashback Deleted Lines
Legacy Deleted Lines
Stellarlune Deleted Lines

I transcribed three of the deleted lines posts that I consider to be pretty interesting and important.

From Shannon Messenger's Instagram, deleted scene from Everblaze:

"Oh, I'm sorry," Kenric said, shaking out the scroll harder and filling the room with more crunching and crackling.  "Am I distracting you?"

"You know very well what you're doing," Bronte snapped.

"I do," Kenric agreed.  "I'm making notes on everything I see happen today."

Bronte sighed.  "There's no need.  I'll be giving the Council a full report tonight."

"Oh this isn't for the Council.  This is for Grady.  I figured he'll want to know exactly how you're treating his daughter." Kenric grinned when Bronte scowled.  "There's nothing quite like an angry Mesmer, is there?"

Sophie had never been more tempted to hug him.

I wish that this part of the Kenric, Bronte, and Sophie Inflicting scene had stayed in the book.  It's great!  Some readers struggle to understand why Sophie is so heartbroken about the loss of Kenric.  This shows why.

Shannon also posted some additional deleted lines from the same scene.

From Shannon Messenger's Instagram, deleted scene from Everblaze:

"Try to imagine yourself somewhere peaceful," Sophie told Bronte.  "Like... a babbling brook."

He snorted.  "That is not a peaceful place, Miss Foster.  It's a haven for trolls."

Sophie sighed.  "Fine.  Then think of somewhere you like to relax."

She fully expected Bronte to tell her it was his job as a Councillor to never relax.  

Instead he said, "Okay I'm picturing a library filled with books I've never read."

"That's... good," Sophie mumbled, surprised that Bronte's peaceful place actually sounded peaceful.  "Now try to relax."

"Done.  What now?"

"Uh, you don't sound relaxed," Sophie noted.

"Shocking, given that I'm currently taking Inflicting lessons from a untrained child!"

From Shannon Messenger's Instagram, deleted scene from Neverseen:

"I think you need a day off," Sophie told Calla.  "Let me cover your 'To Do' list."

"You cannot sing to trees.  And you should be training.  Not washing dishes."

"Hey, my human mom used to say, 'if you have two hands you can put them to work.' "

Calla smiled at that.  "I'm glad they gave you a good mother—mothers, actually.  Lady Ruewen has always been one of my favorites.  As has your genetic mother."

Sophie froze.  "You know who she is?"

"I suggested her.  Please do not ask more than that."

Okay, now this is very interesting.  Shannon had this to say about these deleted lines:

I realized as I got deeper into writing the middle of this series that sometimes it’s better to hold off making something "canon" until I really need to, because it gives me the option of pivoting to a better idea (you know, if I *get* a better idea) as the story develops. So in this case, I'd already given several huge revelations about Calla and didn’t NEED to add this one in. I was also nowhere near to the point in the story where I'd be having Sophie looking into her genetic parents, so I decided to cut this out just in case, when I got to that point in the story... I'd have the option of changing this detail if I needed to. 

Based on what I believe must be true about Mr. Forkle's true identity as well as that of Sophie's father, I do not believe that Calla suggested Oralie to be Sophie's mother.  It had to have been Mr. Forkle's plan all along.  There is no other explanation based on what is revealed in the Forgotten Secrets of Book 9.

However, I really like these deleted lines.  Going off of them, I feel that it's likely that Mr. Forkle had Calla approach Oralie about donating to Project Moonlark.  Calla would have had a great chance of success.  So, that's what I think would be canon.

You can find all of my Keeper posts at this link:

Keeper of the Lost Cities Summaries, Reviews, and Theories

Sunday, July 21, 2024

Protecting My Nancy Drew Action Figures

Last year, Wandering Planet Toys had a Kickstarter.  I was one of the backers, and my action figures arrived on June 1.  If you missed out on the Kickstarter, some action figures should show up eventually on the secondhand market.

I had left the action figures in the shipping box until tonight.  I didn't want them to collect dust, and I hadn't felt like getting them protected.  

Here are some pictures.

Click on images to see them at a higher resolution.








I also received the Nancy Drew novela, Case of the Curious Collection.  The novela was only available through the Kickstarter.  I do have some extras, and eventually I will sell them.




Last year, I purchased a roll of cellophane on Amazon.  

100 ft Clear Cellophane Wrap Roll


The cellophane is fabulous.  It was exactly what I needed.  I had some larger collectible items that I needed to get protected, and the cellophane was perfect for my application.  The cellophane is crystal clear and very thin.  It is exactly like the cellophane that is wrapped around gift baskets and similar items.

I did not want my Nancy Drew action figures to be collecting dust, so I finally wrapped them in the cellophane tonight.  This way when dust collects, it will instead be on the cellophane.  I can gently wipe the cellophane to remove the dust.


In the next photo, all of the action figures are wrapped in cellophane.


While visible, the cellophane is not obtrusive.  I like knowing that dust will not collect on the action figures.

I highly recommend this cellophane wrap if you have any larger or irregularly shaped items that need protection.

eBay and Etsy Books are 15% Off

All of my books on Etsy are now 15% off.  Most of my books on eBay are 15% off.  I have withheld some eBay store categories from the sale.

Jennifer's Series Books on eBay

Jennifer's Series Books on Etsy

My problem is that I need to straighten my eBay and Etsy shelves.  Each time I try, I quit.  I have too many books for sale, and they are in a bit of a mess.  I'd like to get some more sold before I close my stores for the start of school.  If I can get the number of books down some, then I can better straighten the shelves and get the books all nice and compact for however long I'm closed.

These photos show some of my listed books.  The first two photos are of books on eBay, and the last two are of books on Etsy.  I also have books on some other shelves as well.  Click in images in order to see them clearly.





I didn't photograph what really bothers me.  I have quite a few bulk lots, and those lots are stacked in various locations.  Bulk lots just aren't selling like they did in the past.  My bulk lots have tended to go to people buying to resell, and those people are having trouble selling books, so they aren't buying books.  I'm stuck with the bulk lots until the right person finally comes along.

I will close both stores no later than Wednesday, August 7.  I might shut down slightly before then, depending upon what's going on and how I feel.  Since we have new textbooks this year, I expect to be working on some stuff in the week before I go back to work.  I could decide to shut down sooner than August 7.  I go back to work on August 9.

The current sale ends on Sunday, July 28.

Friday, July 19, 2024

Campus Murder Club by Kristi Rose

Campus Murder Club was written by independent author Kristi Rose and was published on October 6, 2023.

Publisher's summary:

Step into a world of intrigue, suspense, and secrets as the Campus Murder Club takes you on a heart-pounding journey through a chilling cold case in Kristi Rose's thrilling young adult mystery novel.

College can be murder.

Nestled in the woods of a Pacific Northwest town, a prestigious college becomes the setting for a chilling murder.  When nursing student Jaime is brutally killed in her exclusive private all-girls room, the authorities quickly abandon her case, dooming it to the cold case files.  But fate has other plans.

Catching a killer can be deadly.

Five unsuspecting students receive cryptic invitations that thrust them into a dangerous game of cat and mouse.  Drawn together by an unknown hand, these citizen sleuths are about to embark on a perilous quest to unearth the truth behind Jaime's murder.

As they delve into Jaime's past, her journal emerges as the key to unraveling the truth, but it also puts their lives in danger.  With every corner filled with lurking peril, the stakes rise, forcing them to confront the deadly consequences of their pursuit.

Will they unmask the killer hiding in plain sight, or will they become the next victims in this deadly game of deception?

The book opens as follows:

The challenge came as a letter, stuffed among the magazines and flyers in their mailboxes.  There was no postage.  No address for the sender or recipient.  Just their names scrawled across the front in a thin, jagged cursive.  Inside was a single sheet of paper.  At the top was an image of a red splatter, the word murder, and a magnifying glass.  The paper could easily have been mistaken for a cheap advertising flyer, an old-school practice gone the way of the dinosaur as smartphones and tablets became the primary source for information and advertising. 

Is There a Killer Among Us?

Do you feel safe on campus?  In your dorm?  Nursing student Jaime Sullivan was raped then strangled in her dorm.  The campus police responded by adding a few extra patrols at night.  The Sheriff's Department has moved on.  Jaime Sullivan is an unsolved case.  Soon to be cold and forgotten.  How does that make you feel?

Who out there cares enough about those who no longer have a voice?  You?

But do you care enough to make a difference?

Come Thursday the 13th Journalism Building 9 p.m.

Five students respond to the letter.  These students were each chosen for a reason, and the author gradually reveals information about each student as the story progresses.  Clues about Jaime's final day and her death are gradually doled out as the students investigate.  The clues are steadily revealed, and the book never has any slow or uninteresting parts.  The book also contains multiple mysteries, which the reader won't see coming.  

The book is written in a mixture of third-person limited and third-person omniscient.  Sometimes the reader only knows one character's thoughts during a scene, and at other times, the reader knows the thoughts of more than one character at the same time.

The mysteries were fully solved at the end of the book, but the Campus Murder Club's future is left slightly open-ended so that a sequel is possible.

If you enjoyed One of Us Is Lying by Karen M. McManus, then you should enjoy reading this book.

This is an excellent book.  I was sorry to reach the end, but I felt quite happy about my reading experience.

Tuesday, July 16, 2024

Only She Came Back by Margot Harrison

Only She Came Back was written by Margot Harrison and published by Little, Brown Books for Young Readers on November 14, 2023.

Publisher's summary:

A chilling thriller about an unlikely friendship between a true-crime fan and a former high school classmate suspected of murdering her influencer boyfriend, perfect for fans of Holly Jackson and Courtney Summers.

On July 28 at 6:30 p.m., Kiri Dunsmore walks out of the desert wearing her boyfriend's sweatshirt, covered in his blood.  Dazed and on the verge of unconsciousness, she tells a cashier that he's still out there and most likely dead.  The disappearance of Callum Massey, a "survival guru" with hundreds of thousands of YouTube followers, rocks the nation.  And Kiri is a prime suspect.

Back in Kiri's hometown, true-crime fanatic Sam is completely hooked on the case—especially now that she recognizes the suspect as shy Katie from high school.  Although they didn't know each other well, that doesn't stop Sam from reaching out to befriend her old classmate.

But when Kiri starts to confide in her, Sam realizes there's more to the story than she had imagined.  Can she keep Kiri's secrets even though revealing them could put her where she's always longed to be—at the center of the story? 

The premise intrigued me.  The public is fascinated with true-crime stories, particularly when the case is unsolved.  This book offers up an unsolved case.  Callum Massey is missing.  He might or might not be dead.  His girlfriend Kiri might have done something to him, but perhaps she's innocent.  What's certain is that the reader doesn't know the whole story and that the mystery will gradually unfold as the book is read. 

The protagonist, Sam, is obsessed with true-crime stories.  When she befriends Kiri, she finds herself in a questionable role.  Should she be a real friend to Kiri, or should she post what she knows online?  In the end, Sam finds herself enmeshed in the case, resulting in dangerous consequences.

After the end of the story, the author, Margot Harrison, opens her acknowledgments with the following passage:

True crime is a fraught subject, for good reasonone that has always made me feel fascinated and queasy in equal measures.  I want to thank everyone who helped me navigate the quandaries of exploring our culture's fascination with murder stories in Only She Came Back.

This book has some strong similarity to the Gabby Petito case, and I felt a strong sense of déjà vu during the opening chapters of the story. 

The online reviews are lukewarm, with most readers giving the book 3 stars.  Many reviewers complain about the similarities to Gabby Petito. 

I don't use a number rating system, but I would probably go with 3-3.5 stars for this book.  Using my own description system, I will go with a rating of good to very good.  I enjoyed reading the book, even though some parts are a bit weak.

Friday, July 12, 2024

The Compound and The Fallout by S. A. Bodeen

The Compound duology was written by S. A. Bodeen and was published by Feiwel & Friends.

1.  The Compound, 2008
2.  The Fallout, 2013

Publisher's summary:

Eli and his family have lived in the Compound for six years.

The world they knew is gone.

Eli's father built the Compound to keep them safe. Now, they can't get out.

He won't let them.

This is a pretty short summary, but it's really all that can be said in order for the book to be appreciated as intended.  I heard about this book via a thread of YA dystopian book recommendations on Reddit.  I opened up the free sample on Amazon and began reading. 

Something struck me as a little odd, and I'm sure that the author wanted readers to pick up on it.  This caused me to want to know more.  I was compelled to keep reading.

As soon as I finished the sample, I closed it and hit the purchase button immediately.  I opened up the Kindle app on my iPad and continued reading without pause.

Usually, I finish the sample and take a few minutes to assess whether I enjoyed the sample enough to purchase the book.  Sometimes I skim the first few reviews.  In this case, my decision came with no thought required.  It likely was the fastest I have ever purchased a book after reading the sample.  

I read the entire book in less than 24 hours and immediately continued with the second book.  I also read it in around 24 hours.

If you think you might be interested in reading The Compound, do not go looking for more detailed summaries, and avoid all online reviews.  Most importantly, stay away from anything having to do with the second book, The Fallout.  The publisher's summary of that book spoils the first book.

Just read the free sample found on Amazon, and make your decision based on how you feel about it.

In reflecting about my reading experience, the early part of the first book contains many mundane details, so it's not that exciting.  I didn't much mind, since I was focused on figuring out whether I was right about what I suspected.

The Compound and The Fallout are highly suspenseful books.  The Compound is overall outstanding, and The Fallout is excellent, just a step down from the first book.

Monday, July 8, 2024

Many Books Listed on eBay and Etsy

I have managed to list a rather large quantity of books on eBay and Etsy in the last week.

Jennifer's Series Books on eBay

The new eBay listings include:

Icelandic, Finnish, and Spanish Nancy Drew books
Beverly Gray at the World's Fair
2 issues of Mystery & Adventure Series Review
2 Biff Brewster books
some Judy Bolton picture cover books
some first printing Judy Bolton dust jacketed books
Vicki Barr #11 in picture cover
hardcover Judy Bolton #39 The Strange Likeness
signed Leo Edwards books
Applewood Nancy Drew books
early printing of Nancy Drew #9 in dust jacket
Dana Girls Guide
book with Judy Bolton #1 and 2 original manuscripts
3 Nancy Drew textured flashlight editions
a Nancy Drew book signed by Harriet Adams
some bulk lots

Jennifer's Series Books on Etsy

The new Etsy listings include:

a variety of Trixie Belden hardcover books
Nancy Drew books in dust jacket
tweed Nancy Drew books
paperback Nancy Drew books
original text Nancy Drew picture covers
revised text Nancy Drew picture covers
books by R. L. Stine
Rick Brant Danger Below!
tweed Dana Girls books
Dana Girls beige spine picture covers
solid blue Nancy Drew books
tweed Judy Bolton books

This is about all that I will be listing for the foreseeable future.  I might list a few more items, but this is about it.  The next time I list books will probably be around October.  

In around three weeks, I will be closing both of the stores temporarily.  I do this just before school starts each year.  The stores are usually closed until around October, depending upon how everything goes.  And I do not expect things to go well at all.  We have new textbooks this year, and there's some other stuff going on that doesn't bode well.  If you want to buy any books from me, make sure you do so by the first few days in August.