The Keeper series was modeled after the Harry Potter series. Many ideas from Harry Potter were incorporated into the Keeper series under different guises.
I just finished reading through all seven Harry Potter books for the fourth time overall. I have read the earlier books up to seven times each, but the final two books have been read just four times each. This fourth read-through of the entire series was the first time I had revisited Harry Potter since becoming a Keeper fan.
I consider the Harry Potter series to be a masterpiece of juvenile fiction. I find that the separation of years and additional readings have caused me to see what I thought were flaws as nothing of the sort. The only quibbles I have with the entire series are that I still don't like the epilogue and that I still find some parts of Half-Blood Prince to bit a bit slow. Otherwise, the Harry Potter series is just about perfect.
When I first read the Keeper series, I saw the obvious similarities to Harry Potter. Reading Harry Potter again has caused me to notice even more of them. Shannon Messenger usually cites X-Men and Lord of the Rings as her inspirations. I'm not sure if Shannon has ever specifically mentioned Harry Potter, but she certainly hasn't since I've been following the fandom. Even so, it's apparent that Keeper has strong echoes of Harry Potter.
Here are parallels that I noticed. I assume that readers are familiar with both series, so I won't be explaining who all the characters are. This post contains important plot spoilers for both series.
Last warning: Quit reading now to avoid spoilers.
Sophie lived with an overweight human family. Harry Potter lived with the Dursleys, and two of them were extremely overweight. In both series, the family's other child was obnoxious.
History is boring in both series.
Harry isn't good at Potions, and Snape hates him. Sophie isn't good at Alchemy, and Lady Galvin hates her.
Sophie tells the other kids that she's taking remedial studies to cover for her Telepathy sessions. Harry takes Remedial Potions as a cover for Occlumency.
Dumbledore and Forkle are the mentors to the protagonists. Dumbledore is Headmaster, and Forkle is Principal as Leto. Dumbledore dies, and one Forkle dies.
Alden explains his job:
"Humans are always doing crazy, dangerous things. If they're not lighting something on fire, they're spilling oil in the ocean or blowing something up. Every time they do, I investigate to make sure things don't get out of hand." (Keeper of the Lost Cities, page 85)
Alden's counterpart is Arthur Weasley, who works in the Misuse of Muggle Artifacts Office.
In Harry Potter, potions are used to achieve certain results, and in Keeper, they are called elixirs.
The light leaping in Keeper is usually compared to apparating from Harry Potter. While that comparison is valid, I also see apparating as similar to teleporting.
Hermione twisted in midair and the thundering of the collapsing house rang in Harry's ears as she dragged him once more into darkness. (Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows, Chapter 21)
That sounds like teleporting to me. Apparating parallels light leaping in another sense.
...a small wizard whom Harry took to be the Apparition instructor from the Ministry. He was oddly colorless, with transparent eyelashes, wispy hair, and an insubstantial air, as though a single gust of wind might blow him away. Harry wondered whether constant disappearances and reappearances had somehow diminished his substance, or whether this frail build was ideal for anyone wishing to vanish. (Harry Potter and the Half-Blood Prince, Chapter 18)
Apparating excessively might cause fading, and too much light leaping causes fading.
Harry Potter is The Boy Who Lived. Both Alvar and Keefe are The Boy Who Disappeared.
The names Cassius and Lucius are eerily similar, and both names are used for the unpleasant parent of a school acquaintance.
Dumbledore's Pensieve serves the same purpose as Kenric's cache with the Forgotten Secrets. In both series, the plot device is used brilliantly.
Squibs can't do magic, and Talentless elves have no ability.
Both elves and wizards think they are better than humans/Muggles.
Exile is the elves' version of Azkaban. When an elf is sent to Exile, their memory is broken, leaving them in a vegetative state. The Dementors guard Azkaban and punish wizards by using the Dementors' Kiss to suck out the soul, leaving the wizard in a vegetative state.
In Keeper, Prattles candy comes with Prattles pins, featuring different kinds of animals. In Harry Potter, Chocolate Frogs come with trading cards. Both the Prattles pins and Chocolate Frog trading cards are collected by kids.
At Foxfire, the DNA strip on each locker changes flavor each day, and the flavor is sometimes gross. This parallels Bertie Bott's Every Flavor Beans.
Hermione introduces herself to Harry and Ron by rattling off a bunch of information before saying her name. She says it all very quickly (Harry Potter and the Sorcerer's Stone, Chapter 6). Jensi introduces himself to Sophie in the same fashion.
Both Snape and Alvar are treated similarly in parallel scenes from the two series.
Harry went right after Sirius, who was still making Snape drift along ahead of them; he kept bumping his lolling head on the low ceiling. Harry had the impression Sirius was making no effort to prevent this. (Harry Potter and the Prisoner of Azkaban, Chapter 20)
"Here," Biana said, letting her mind take control—and smacking Alvar's body against the metal railing in the process. "That was an accident," she insisted. But a few minutes later she banged his shoulder. Then his head. (Nightfall, page 446)
Sophie can't read runes, and neither can Harry (Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows, Chapter 16).
Nox is the spell to turn off the light at the tip of a wand. In Keeper, Noxflares are fire-resistant, and fire is a source of light.
Hermione puts protective enchantments around the trio's camp:
Harry saw little disturbances in the surrounding air: It was as if Hermione had cast a heat haze upon their clearing. (Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows, Chapter 14)
This is very similar to what happens when illusions are put in place in Keeper, and both plot devices serve to hide a location from everyone else.
He had made his choice while he dug Dobby's grave, he had decided to continue along the winding, dangerous path indicated for him by Albus Dumbledore, to accept that he had not been told everything that he wanted to know, but simply to trust. (Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows, Chapter 28)
Harry's thoughts remind me of what Oralie says in Legacy on page 157:
"And keep in mind," Oralie added, finally turning her azure eyes toward Sophie, "true trust does not require absolute transparency. There is incredible power in accepting that there are some things you cannot know—and being willing to maintain your commitment to that person despite the secrets."
In Keeper, the Washers modify the memories of Sophie's human parents and sister so that they don't remember her. The Fosters are given new names and are moved to a new house.
Hermione does the same to her parents to protect them from Voldemort.
"I've also modified my parents' memories so that they're convinced they're really called Wendell and Monica Wilkins, and that their life's ambition is to move to Australia, which they have now done."
In Chapter 17 of Half-Blood Prince, Harry learns that Slughorn tampered with his own memory to hide what he told Tom.
In Keeper, Kenric tampers with Forgotten Secret #4 with Fintan to hide what he learned when he entered Fintan's mind.
"Wizarding history often skates over what the wizards have done to other magical races, but there's no account that I know of that says Gryffindor stole the sword." (Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows, Chapter 25)
In Nightfall, Mr. Forkle reveals that the elves experimented on humans in ancient times. The elves then buried the information and pretended that humans caused the rift between the two species.
Voldemort is confident that Harry will come to him because of what he perceives as Harry's weakness.
"I know his weakness, you see, his one great flaw. He will hate watching the others struck down around him, knowing that it is for him that it happens. He will want to stop it at any cost. He will come." (Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows, Chapter 32)
Vespera has a similar opinion of Sophie.
"...you are still trying to save everyone. It is why you will always lose—time and time again. You will always delay. Always try for the impossible while ignoring the most logical options... every time you allow yourself to care... will only make you weak and vulnerable." (Nightfall, page 701)
Everything I've mentioned are the obvious similarities that most all fans should agree on. There are more, of course.
Let's now cover the parallels concerning my belief that Forkle is Kenric. I know he is, but the rest of the fanbase is in complete denial and refuses to believe it until Shannon directly reveals it. She's actually already revealed Forkle's identity indirectly through the Forgotten Secrets, but fans will require a direct statement before they will accept it. They steadfastly continue to ignore the classic literary clues.
Kenric is Forkle, and Forkle is a pair of twins. More specifically, Forkle is a pair of redheaded twins. The older twin dies in Lodestar.
The Harry Potter series features Fred and George Weasley, who are a pair of redheaded twins. The older twin, Fred, dies in Deathly Hallows.
Kenric is a lighthearted, smiling, and joking character. And so are the Weasley twins.
I've mentioned this parallel once before on Reddit. The response was that Kenric has more layers to his character than the Weasley twins do and so isn't much like the Weasleys. That doesn't change my statement that the sets of twins parallel each other. Just like Forkle and Dumbledore are parallel characters, but they aren't at all the same. The Forkle twins and the Weasley twins have obvious parallels, but they aren't exactly the same.
The two series have parallel anagrams as well. I discovered that "Kenric Elgar Fathdon" rearranges to form the phrase "Forkle grin and teach." In the Harry Potter series, "Tom Marvolo Riddle" rearranges as "I am Lord Voldemort."
The anagrams parallel each other, but they do not have the same composition. This is the crux of the problem. Fans have said that if the Kenric/Forkle anagram were a direct statement like "I am Errol Loki Forkle" then they would believe it. Since it doesn't, they think Shannon's anagram is meaningless.
This statement, which I know is just coincidence, is remarkable:
"Well, you weren't the first person riddle wormed things out of," Harry muttered. "He could be charming when he wanted..." (Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows, Chapter 31)
Oralie makes this statement about Kenric on pages 222 of Stellarlune:
"He could be quite charming when he wanted to be."
I do not consider Tom Riddle/Voldemort and Kenric/Forkle to be parallel characters, but they are the two key characters whose names are plot-relevant anagrams. It's interesting that each character is described as "charming when he wanted."
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