Friday, July 26, 2024

The Riddle of Raven's Gulch by Mary Francis Shura

The Riddle of Raven's Gulch was published by Weekly Reader Books in hardcover in 1975.  The book was also reprinted by Scholastic in softcover under the title The Riddle of Raven Hollow.  Both editions are very common.  

Summary:

The first time Bart hears that Raven's Gulch is haunted, he laughs.  After all, Bart visits the gulch every day.  His newspaper route takes him past the gulch, and his friend, old Mr. Bergen, lives right by the gulch. 

The rumors begin to bother Bart, because they taint his good feelings about his favorite place.  He decides to look into the situation.

Bart learns that a strange car has been seen near the gulch.  Neighbors have reported odd sounds and lights.  Bart sees a shadowy figure in the gulch and soon realizes that something dangerous is going on.  He must find out what it is.

Here's how Bart describes Raven's Gulch on pages 14 and 15.

Everything changes at once when you leave Maple Street.  My bike tires stop that funny singing noise that they make on pavement.  The sound is hidden and muffled as I hit the rutted road.  I can hear my canvas paper bag hit my side soft like a dog's tail wagging.  Instead of green lawns there are deep grassy pastures held back by fencing that staggers raggedly along the roadside.  Even if the sun is shining back on Maple Street, those big trees whose branches meet above the road make it seem like twilight all the time.

I figured they must have laid that road out by an animal trail because it wanders around a lot instead of going straight.  Even though it's bumped and curvy it isn't too hard to bike on because there is never any traffic to watch out for.  I can just wheel any old place in the road. 

After a couple of fenced off pastures, I come to Raven's Gulch.  Maybe it sounds silly but I always think of Raven's Gulch as being my very own place.  Sure, it  has NO TRESPASSING signs posted all along the fence, but Mr. Burgen put them up and he and I are friends.  

More times than I can remember he has told me in his heavy foreign accent, to "Pay those signs no mind."

I take him at his word, too, because there's no time of the year that Raven's Gulch isn't just great.

The spring is the loudest time.  The place is thick with birds and though they sing like everything, they can't drown out the rush of the melted snow water making that little stream into a small icy river.  All sorts of bushy plants bloom and the place is wild with bees.  

In summer I like the berries.  Nobody has ever trimmed those old blackberry brambles and they sprawl around in thorny mountains.  There is no way you can reach the inside ones (which always look the fattest and blackest) because the thorns are curved and mean.  But even just picking on the outside I get quarts and quarts of berries.  Last summer I sold twelve boxes to Mr. Kovacs at the store and took four or five pails to Mr. Burgen's housekeeper for deep dish pies.  After the berries are gone and it gets hot, I like to just sit there in the green cool by the stream and watch the slivers of minnows flicker in the dark of the water and catch tadpoles in my fingers to take home.

The author had me hooked at this point.  This excellent description gave me a reason to care.  Raven's Gulch sounded fabulous, and I wanted Bart to solve the mystery so that he could continue to enjoy his special place.

I like this remark from page 29:

"Things like that don't exist," I said, almost sounding angry without meaning to.

"What really is don't scare people," he said quietly.  "It's what they think is."

This book was written in a fashion that makes it pleasant to read.  It hits the right tone and is interesting from start to finish.  The story is pretty simple and has just 124 pages, but it reads like a series book.  I really enjoyed it.

Wednesday, July 24, 2024

Deleted Lines from Keeper of the Lost Cities Books

This post contains a spoiler from late in the series and hints at other late series spoilers.  Do not read this post unless you have read ALL of the Keeper books. 

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Back in 2020, Shannon Messenger posted deleted lines on her Instagram.  A Tumblr user compiled them.  The Tumblr posts are a handy way to see the posts at a glance without having to scroll back through years of Instagram posts.  I did exactly that just because I wanted to verify that the captured posts are from Shannon's Instagram.  And they are.

There is a lot of misinformation about this series that has been spread online between fans.  For instance, if you ask Google who Sophie's father is, Google gives a wrong answer based on a fake story someone told in an online forum.  Google even quotes the fake story, so that is how little we can trust online content about this series.  When someone says that something came from Shannon Messenger, I make certain.  I take no chances.  

Here are the Tumblr pages that compile Messenger's posts giving her deleted lines.

Exile Deleted Lines
Everblaze Deleted Lines
Neverseen Deleted Lines
Neverseen Deleted Lines Part 2
Lodestar Deleted Lines
Lodestar Deleted Lines Part 2
Nightfall Deleted Lines
Flashback Deleted Lines
Legacy Deleted Lines
Stellarlune Deleted Lines

I transcribed three of the deleted lines posts that I consider to be pretty interesting and important.

From Shannon Messenger's Instagram, deleted scene from Everblaze:

"Oh, I'm sorry," Kenric said, shaking out the scroll harder and filling the room with more crunching and crackling.  "Am I distracting you?"

"You know very well what you're doing," Bronte snapped.

"I do," Kenric agreed.  "I'm making notes on everything I see happen today."

Bronte sighed.  "There's no need.  I'll be giving the Council a full report tonight."

"Oh this isn't for the Council.  This is for Grady.  I figured he'll want to know exactly how you're treating his daughter." Kenric grinned when Bronte scowled.  "There's nothing quite like an angry Mesmer, is there?"

Sophie had never been more tempted to hug him.

I wish that this part of the Kenric, Bronte, and Sophie Inflicting scene had stayed in the book.  It's great!  Some readers struggle to understand why Sophie is so heartbroken about the loss of Kenric.  This shows why.

Shannon also posted some additional deleted lines from the same scene.

From Shannon Messenger's Instagram, deleted scene from Everblaze:

"Try to imagine yourself somewhere peaceful," Sophie told Bronte.  "Like... a babbling brook."

He snorted.  "That is not a peaceful place, Miss Foster.  It's a haven for trolls."

Sophie sighed.  "Fine.  Then think of somewhere you like to relax."

She fully expected Bronte to tell her it was his job as a Councillor to never relax.  

Instead he said, "Okay I'm picturing a library filled with books I've never read."

"That's... good," Sophie mumbled, surprised that Bronte's peaceful place actually sounded peaceful.  "Now try to relax."

"Done.  What now?"

"Uh, you don't sound relaxed," Sophie noted.

"Shocking, given that I'm currently taking Inflicting lessons from a untrained child!"

From Shannon Messenger's Instagram, deleted scene from Neverseen:

"I think you need a day off," Sophie told Calla.  "Let me cover your 'To Do' list."

"You cannot sing to trees.  And you should be training.  Not washing dishes."

"Hey, my human mom used to say, 'if you have two hands you can put them to work.' "

Calla smiled at that.  "I'm glad they gave you a good mother—mothers, actually.  Lady Ruewen has always been one of my favorites.  As has your genetic mother."

Sophie froze.  "You know who she is?"

"I suggested her.  Please do not ask more than that."

Okay, now this is very interesting.  Shannon had this to say about these deleted lines:

I realized as I got deeper into writing the middle of this series that sometimes it’s better to hold off making something "canon" until I really need to, because it gives me the option of pivoting to a better idea (you know, if I *get* a better idea) as the story develops. So in this case, I'd already given several huge revelations about Calla and didn’t NEED to add this one in. I was also nowhere near to the point in the story where I'd be having Sophie looking into her genetic parents, so I decided to cut this out just in case, when I got to that point in the story... I'd have the option of changing this detail if I needed to. 

Based on what I believe must be true about Mr. Forkle's true identity as well as that of Sophie's father, I do not believe that Calla suggested Oralie to be Sophie's mother.  It had to have been Mr. Forkle's plan all along.  There is no other explanation based on what is revealed in the Forgotten Secrets of Book 9.

However, I really like these deleted lines.  Going off of them, I feel that it's likely that Mr. Forkle had Calla approach Oralie about donating to Project Moonlark.  Calla would have had a great chance of success.  So, that's what I think would be canon.

You can find all of my Keeper posts at this link:

Keeper of the Lost Cities Summaries, Reviews, and Theories

Sunday, July 21, 2024

Protecting My Nancy Drew Action Figures

Last year, Wandering Planet Toys had a Kickstarter.  I was one of the backers, and my action figures arrived on June 1.  If you missed out on the Kickstarter, some action figures should show up eventually on the secondhand market.

I had left the action figures in the shipping box until tonight.  I didn't want them to collect dust, and I hadn't felt like getting them protected.  

Here are some pictures.

Click on images to see them at a higher resolution.








I also received the Nancy Drew novela, Case of the Curious Collection.  The novela was only available through the Kickstarter.  I do have some extras, and eventually I will sell them.




Last year, I purchased a roll of cellophane on Amazon.  

100 ft Clear Cellophane Wrap Roll


The cellophane is fabulous.  It was exactly what I needed.  I had some larger collectible items that I needed to get protected, and the cellophane was perfect for my application.  The cellophane is crystal clear and very thin.  It is exactly like the cellophane that is wrapped around gift baskets and similar items.

I did not want my Nancy Drew action figures to be collecting dust, so I finally wrapped them in the cellophane tonight.  This way when dust collects, it will instead be on the cellophane.  I can gently wipe the cellophane to remove the dust.


In the next photo, all of the action figures are wrapped in cellophane.


While visible, the cellophane is not obtrusive.  I like knowing that dust will not collect on the action figures.

I highly recommend this cellophane wrap if you have any larger or irregularly shaped items that need protection.

eBay and Etsy Books are 15% Off

All of my books on Etsy are now 15% off.  Most of my books on eBay are 15% off.  I have withheld some eBay store categories from the sale.

Jennifer's Series Books on eBay

Jennifer's Series Books on Etsy

My problem is that I need to straighten my eBay and Etsy shelves.  Each time I try, I quit.  I have too many books for sale, and they are in a bit of a mess.  I'd like to get some more sold before I close my stores for the start of school.  If I can get the number of books down some, then I can better straighten the shelves and get the books all nice and compact for however long I'm closed.

These photos show some of my listed books.  The first two photos are of books on eBay, and the last two are of books on Etsy.  I also have books on some other shelves as well.  Click in images in order to see them clearly.





I didn't photograph what really bothers me.  I have quite a few bulk lots, and those lots are stacked in various locations.  Bulk lots just aren't selling like they did in the past.  My bulk lots have tended to go to people buying to resell, and those people are having trouble selling books, so they aren't buying books.  I'm stuck with the bulk lots until the right person finally comes along.

I will close both stores no later than Wednesday, August 7.  I might shut down slightly before then, depending upon what's going on and how I feel.  Since we have new textbooks this year, I expect to be working on some stuff in the week before I go back to work.  I could decide to shut down sooner than August 7.  I go back to work on August 9.

The current sale ends on Sunday, July 28.

Friday, July 19, 2024

Campus Murder Club by Kristi Rose

Campus Murder Club was written by independent author Kristi Rose and was published on October 6, 2023.

Publisher's summary:

Step into a world of intrigue, suspense, and secrets as the Campus Murder Club takes you on a heart-pounding journey through a chilling cold case in Kristi Rose's thrilling young adult mystery novel.

College can be murder.

Nestled in the woods of a Pacific Northwest town, a prestigious college becomes the setting for a chilling murder.  When nursing student Jaime is brutally killed in her exclusive private all-girls room, the authorities quickly abandon her case, dooming it to the cold case files.  But fate has other plans.

Catching a killer can be deadly.

Five unsuspecting students receive cryptic invitations that thrust them into a dangerous game of cat and mouse.  Drawn together by an unknown hand, these citizen sleuths are about to embark on a perilous quest to unearth the truth behind Jaime's murder.

As they delve into Jaime's past, her journal emerges as the key to unraveling the truth, but it also puts their lives in danger.  With every corner filled with lurking peril, the stakes rise, forcing them to confront the deadly consequences of their pursuit.

Will they unmask the killer hiding in plain sight, or will they become the next victims in this deadly game of deception?

The book opens as follows:

The challenge came as a letter, stuffed among the magazines and flyers in their mailboxes.  There was no postage.  No address for the sender or recipient.  Just their names scrawled across the front in a thin, jagged cursive.  Inside was a single sheet of paper.  At the top was an image of a red splatter, the word murder, and a magnifying glass.  The paper could easily have been mistaken for a cheap advertising flyer, an old-school practice gone the way of the dinosaur as smartphones and tablets became the primary source for information and advertising. 

Is There a Killer Among Us?

Do you feel safe on campus?  In your dorm?  Nursing student Jaime Sullivan was raped then strangled in her dorm.  The campus police responded by adding a few extra patrols at night.  The Sheriff's Department has moved on.  Jaime Sullivan is an unsolved case.  Soon to be cold and forgotten.  How does that make you feel?

Who out there cares enough about those who no longer have a voice?  You?

But do you care enough to make a difference?

Come Thursday the 13th Journalism Building 9 p.m.

Five students respond to the letter.  These students were each chosen for a reason, and the author gradually reveals information about each student as the story progresses.  Clues about Jaime's final day and her death are gradually doled out as the students investigate.  The clues are steadily revealed, and the book never has any slow or uninteresting parts.  The book also contains multiple mysteries, which the reader won't see coming.  

The book is written in a mixture of third-person limited and third-person omniscient.  Sometimes the reader only knows one character's thoughts during a scene, and at other times, the reader knows the thoughts of more than one character at the same time.

The mysteries were fully solved at the end of the book, but the Campus Murder Club's future is left slightly open-ended so that a sequel is possible.

If you enjoyed One of Us Is Lying by Karen M. McManus, then you should enjoy reading this book.

This is an excellent book.  I was sorry to reach the end, but I felt quite happy about my reading experience.

Tuesday, July 16, 2024

Only She Came Back by Margot Harrison

Only She Came Back was written by Margot Harrison and published by Little, Brown Books for Young Readers on November 14, 2023.

Publisher's summary:

A chilling thriller about an unlikely friendship between a true-crime fan and a former high school classmate suspected of murdering her influencer boyfriend, perfect for fans of Holly Jackson and Courtney Summers.

On July 28 at 6:30 p.m., Kiri Dunsmore walks out of the desert wearing her boyfriend's sweatshirt, covered in his blood.  Dazed and on the verge of unconsciousness, she tells a cashier that he's still out there and most likely dead.  The disappearance of Callum Massey, a "survival guru" with hundreds of thousands of YouTube followers, rocks the nation.  And Kiri is a prime suspect.

Back in Kiri's hometown, true-crime fanatic Sam is completely hooked on the case—especially now that she recognizes the suspect as shy Katie from high school.  Although they didn't know each other well, that doesn't stop Sam from reaching out to befriend her old classmate.

But when Kiri starts to confide in her, Sam realizes there's more to the story than she had imagined.  Can she keep Kiri's secrets even though revealing them could put her where she's always longed to be—at the center of the story? 

The premise intrigued me.  The public is fascinated with true-crime stories, particularly when the case is unsolved.  This book offers up an unsolved case.  Callum Massey is missing.  He might or might not be dead.  His girlfriend Kiri might have done something to him, but perhaps she's innocent.  What's certain is that the reader doesn't know the whole story and that the mystery will gradually unfold as the book is read. 

The protagonist, Sam, is obsessed with true-crime stories.  When she befriends Kiri, she finds herself in a questionable role.  Should she be a real friend to Kiri, or should she post what she knows online?  In the end, Sam finds herself enmeshed in the case, resulting in dangerous consequences.

After the end of the story, the author, Margot Harrison, opens her acknowledgments with the following passage:

True crime is a fraught subject, for good reasonone that has always made me feel fascinated and queasy in equal measures.  I want to thank everyone who helped me navigate the quandaries of exploring our culture's fascination with murder stories in Only She Came Back.

This book has some strong similarity to the Gabby Petito case, and I felt a strong sense of déjà vu during the opening chapters of the story. 

The online reviews are lukewarm, with most readers giving the book 3 stars.  Many reviewers complain about the similarities to Gabby Petito. 

I don't use a number rating system, but I would probably go with 3-3.5 stars for this book.  Using my own description system, I will go with a rating of good to very good.  I enjoyed reading the book, even though some parts are a bit weak.

Friday, July 12, 2024

The Compound and The Fallout by S. A. Bodeen

The Compound duology was written by S. A. Bodeen and was published by Feiwel & Friends.

1.  The Compound, 2008
2.  The Fallout, 2013

Publisher's summary:

Eli and his family have lived in the Compound for six years.

The world they knew is gone.

Eli's father built the Compound to keep them safe. Now, they can't get out.

He won't let them.

This is a pretty short summary, but it's really all that can be said in order for the book to be appreciated as intended.  I heard about this book via a thread of YA dystopian book recommendations on Reddit.  I opened up the free sample on Amazon and began reading. 

Something struck me as a little odd, and I'm sure that the author wanted readers to pick up on it.  This caused me to want to know more.  I was compelled to keep reading.

As soon as I finished the sample, I closed it and hit the purchase button immediately.  I opened up the Kindle app on my iPad and continued reading without pause.

Usually, I finish the sample and take a few minutes to assess whether I enjoyed the sample enough to purchase the book.  Sometimes I skim the first few reviews.  In this case, my decision came with no thought required.  It likely was the fastest I have ever purchased a book after reading the sample.  

I read the entire book in less than 24 hours and immediately continued with the second book.  I also read it in around 24 hours.

If you think you might be interested in reading The Compound, do not go looking for more detailed summaries, and avoid all online reviews.  Most importantly, stay away from anything having to do with the second book, The Fallout.  The publisher's summary of that book spoils the first book.

Just read the free sample found on Amazon, and make your decision based on how you feel about it.

In reflecting about my reading experience, the early part of the first book contains many mundane details, so it's not that exciting.  I didn't much mind, since I was focused on figuring out whether I was right about what I suspected.

The Compound and The Fallout are highly suspenseful books.  The Compound is overall outstanding, and The Fallout is excellent, just a step down from the first book.

Monday, July 8, 2024

Many Books Listed on eBay and Etsy

I have managed to list a rather large quantity of books on eBay and Etsy in the last week.

Jennifer's Series Books on eBay

The new eBay listings include:

Icelandic, Finnish, and Spanish Nancy Drew books
Beverly Gray at the World's Fair
2 issues of Mystery & Adventure Series Review
2 Biff Brewster books
some Judy Bolton picture cover books
some first printing Judy Bolton dust jacketed books
Vicki Barr #11 in picture cover
hardcover Judy Bolton #39 The Strange Likeness
signed Leo Edwards books
Applewood Nancy Drew books
early printing of Nancy Drew #9 in dust jacket
Dana Girls Guide
book with Judy Bolton #1 and 2 original manuscripts
3 Nancy Drew textured flashlight editions
a Nancy Drew book signed by Harriet Adams
some bulk lots

Jennifer's Series Books on Etsy

The new Etsy listings include:

a variety of Trixie Belden hardcover books
Nancy Drew books in dust jacket
tweed Nancy Drew books
paperback Nancy Drew books
original text Nancy Drew picture covers
revised text Nancy Drew picture covers
books by R. L. Stine
Rick Brant Danger Below!
tweed Dana Girls books
Dana Girls beige spine picture covers
solid blue Nancy Drew books
tweed Judy Bolton books

This is about all that I will be listing for the foreseeable future.  I might list a few more items, but this is about it.  The next time I list books will probably be around October.  

In around three weeks, I will be closing both of the stores temporarily.  I do this just before school starts each year.  The stores are usually closed until around October, depending upon how everything goes.  And I do not expect things to go well at all.  We have new textbooks this year, and there's some other stuff going on that doesn't bode well.  If you want to buy any books from me, make sure you do so by the first few days in August.

Saturday, July 6, 2024

The Michael Vey Series by Richard Paul Evans

The Michael Vey series is written by Richard Paul Evans and is published by Simon & Schuster under the Simon Pulse imprint.

 1.  Michael Vey: The Prisoner of Cell 25, 2011
 2.  Michael Vey: Rise of the Elgen, 2012
 3.  Michael Vey: Battle of the Ampere, 2013
 4.  Michael Vey: Hunt for Jade Dragon, 2014
 5.  Michael Vey: Storm of Lightning, 2015
 6.  Michael Vey: Fall of Hades, 2016
 7.  Michael Vey: The Final Spark, 2017
 8.  Michael Vey: The Parasite, 2022
 9.  Michael Vey: The Traitor, 2023
10.  to be released late 2024

Publisher's summary for Michael Vey: The Prisoner of Cell 25:

To everyone at Meridian High School, fourteen-year-old Michael Vey is nothing special, just the kid who has Tourette’s syndrome.  But in truth, Michael is extremely special—he has electric powers.  Michael thinks he is unique until he discovers that a cheerleader named Taylor has the same mysterious powers.  With the help of Michael's friend, Ostin, the three of them set out to discover how Michael and Taylor ended up with their abilities, and their investigation soon brings them to the attention of a powerful group who wants to control the electric teens—and through them, the world.

Michael discovers that he is part of a group of 17 teenagers who all have electric powers—basically superpowers.  The teenagers call themselves the Electroclan.  A group called the Elgen are responsible for their existence.  The Elgen are money- and power-hungry terrorists.  I cannot overstate how evil the Elgen leader Dr. Hatch is.  He tortures, maims, and kills people in the most horrific ways imaginable.  

The writing is simple and heavy on dialogue.  The books fit best into the young adult category due to the age of the characters, the violence, and the overall plot.  However, these books could be consumed easily by middle-grade readers.

Michael's best friend, Ostin, is a walking encyclopedia.  He knows everything and spouts off knowledge about any location visited by the Electroclan.  In the early books, I found Ostin's commentary to be fun.  Later in the set, way too much text is devoted to Ostin's knowledge.

The story moves very fast with minimal descriptions.  Something is always happening.  The books also have great humor.  I read very fast and found the story to be extremely engaging.

Even though I greatly enjoyed the story arc, the books are wearying at times.  There is a lot of repetition in how the plots unfold.  In every book, Michael and his friends attack the Elgen and do so against insurmountable odds, like attacking the Elgen when they have thousands of troops in place.  The teens predictably lose and nearly die (sometimes a teen or other character does die) but then somehow most everyone miraculously manages not to be killed.  Rinse, repeat for each subsequent book.

Books 2 through 4 are quite repetitious, then the reader starts to learn new information at around book 5, which adds interest.  

I quit reading the series after I finished book 7, for several reasons.

First, much of book 7 centers around new secondary characters who are of little interest.  I skimmed through most of the parts that center on these characters, certainly at least 100 pages of text.  This was just filler for a thin story.

Second, the series jumps the shark with book 7.  Michael's power develops to the point where he is insanely unstoppable.  He is absent for most of book 7 and is presumed dead, but I knew he wasn't dead.  The Michael Vey series has additional titles, so I knew Michael had to be alive.  It is apparent for much of the book that Michael will reappear near the end and save the day.  That keeps the book from being truly suspenseful.

Third and most important, book 7 is the end of the original story arc.  Book 8 was not published until five years later.  It's apparent that the author decided to cash in with a new story arc tacked onto the existing series. 

While I enjoyed my reading experience (except for book 7), I want to leave the story where it ends with book 7.  That book does have a distinct and satisfying conclusion.  After the series is truly finished, I might go back and read the later books, but I probably won't.

Wednesday, July 3, 2024

The Chaperone by M. Hendrix

The Chaperone by M. Hendrix was published by Sourcebooks Fire on June 6, 2023.

Publisher's summary:

"Hendrix's dystopian society is somewhat of a Handmaid's Tale for YA, and offers a dark world with a glimmer of hope."— Booklist, STARRED review

Like every young woman in New America, Stella knows the rules:

Deflect attention.

Abstain from sin.

Navigate the world with care.

Give obedience.

Embrace purity.

Respect your chaperone.

Girls in New America must have a chaperone with them at all times.  Because of this, Stella is never alone.  She can't go out by herself or learn about the world.  She can't even spend time with boys except at formal Visitations.  Still, Stella feels lucky that her chaperone, Sister Helen, is like a friend to her.

And then the unthinkable happens.  Sister Helen dies suddenly, and Stella feels lost.  Especially when she's assigned a new chaperone just days later.

Sister Laura is... different.  She has radical ideas about what Stella should be doing.  She leaves Stella alone in public and even knows how to get into the "Hush Hush" parties where all kinds of forbidden things happen.  As Stella spends more time with Sister Laura, she begins to question everything she's been taught.  What if the Constables' rules don't actually protect girls?  What if they were never meant to keep them safe?

I am quite familiar with The Handmaid's Tale story even though I've never read the book.  I tried the Kindle sample of the book in 2022, but I did not care for the writing style.  It was too disjointed for me.  Instead, I watched the Hulu television series, which I enjoyed, even though the show is crazy.

As I began reading The Chaperone, I saw the obvious similarities to The Handmaid's Tale.  While I found the early part of the story to be interesting, I also felt like I was reading a story that I already knew.

Stella goes to one of the "Hush Hush" parties.  It's quickly apparent to the reader that the parties are for sex only, and mainly so that the boys can rape the girls.  Stella is a bit slow to figure it out, which I found annoying.  She comes very close to being raped.

After that, Stella decides that she wants out, and this was where the story finally became compelling for me.  I was quite engaged from that point on.

Overall, this book is very good to excellent.  It is set up for a sequel, so hopefully another book will be written.

Saturday, June 29, 2024

The Rule of Three Trilogy by Eric Walters

The Rule of Three Trilogy was written by Eric Walters and published by Farrar, Straus, & Giroux.

1.  The Rule of Three, 2014
2.  The Rule of Three: Fight for Power, 2015
3.  The Rule of Three: Will to Survive, 2016

Publishers summary:

One shocking afternoon, computers around the globe shut down in a viral catastrophe.  At sixteen-year-old Adam Daley's high school, the problem first seems to be a typical electrical outage, until students discover that cell phones are down, municipal utilities are failing, and a few computer-free cars like Adam's are the only vehicles that function. 

Driving home, Adam encounters a storm tide of anger and fear as the region becomes paralyzed.  Soon—as resources dwindle, crises mount, and chaos descends—he will see his suburban neighborhood band together for protection.  And Adam will understand that having a police captain for a mother and a retired government spy living next door are not just the facts of his life but the keys to his survival, in The Rule of Three by Eric Walters.

This is an interesting take on the apocalypse plot.  Typically, post-apocalyptic stories begin with total mayhem and immediate killing sprees within the early pages of the story.  The characters end up on the run, eventually finding an oasis in some distant part of the country, where they can finally regain a sense of normalcy.  Sometimes the oasis falls, and the characters must try to find somewhere else that is safe.

In these books, Adam's neighborhood is the oasis.  We follow their story as they build a safe haven and defend it against the outsiders who try to steal what they have.  Since Adam and his acquaintances are never on the run, the plot is rather slow for much of the first book.  It gradually becomes more interesting as complications and threats develop.

Since the book doesn't open with instant mayhem, it is more realistic than many of these types of stories.

Overall, this is a very good trilogy.  It does drag at times.

Friday, June 28, 2024

Books Reduced on eBay

I reduced the prices of around 40 books on eBay.  Some of the reductions were significant, and some of the books are priced well below what I paid.  I need some of this stuff to go away.  I'd rather sell the books at below cost than donate them.

Jennifer's Series Books on eBay

I ended the listings and reduced the prices when I relisted them in order to give them additional exposure as new listings.  Sort my store by "newly listed" first to see the books that were reduced.

I am trying to motivate myself into listing books, but it's not going well.  June has been tremendously busy and stressful, and I just have no motivation.  A lot of my motivation results from successfully selling books.  Since most of my eBay inventory is stagnant, I hardly want to add more stagnant items.

I also have books on Etsy, although I haven't reduced any prices.

Jennifer's Series Books on Etsy

Wednesday, June 26, 2024

The Wilders Duology by Cass Kim

The Wilders duology was written and published by independent author Cass Kim.

1.  Wilders: A Dystopian Half-Pocalypse Series, 2019
2.  Consequences: A Wilders Finale, 2020

The set can also be purchased in digital format as a trilogy with a prequel, The Change, included.  I read The Change between volumes 1 and 2, and that is probably when the prequel should be read.  The reader can only appreciate certain aspects of The Change with knowledge gleaned from having read the first Wilders book.

Publisher's summary:

The forest behind Renna’s home is dark and dense. It holds more secrets than she knows. Having grown up in the half-pocalypse, a world balancing against the tide of a blood-borne virus, Renna knows the rules by heart:

1) Stay inside between dusk and dawn.
2) Close and lock the copper and silver screens.
3) Report anyone suspected of infection immediately.

Now, at seventeen, Renna will have to survive against the rules.

- An unprecedented attack.
- A strange boy with copper eyes.

Can Renna survive the darkness to save the people she loves?

The first book captured my attention pretty quickly.  I was worried about Renna's cat, however.  Timmy Tammy, also known as Tim Tam, is a large cat who is Renna's beloved companion.  It's clear from the beginning of the first book that Renna's home will soon be the site of an attack.  I feared for Tim Tam, since it would have been too sad for him to have been killed.  I mention this to reassure anyone who decides to read these books that Tim Tam will be fine.  He doesn't die.

I enjoyed reading these books.

Sunday, June 23, 2024

Keeper of the Lost Cities Fan Negativity and Criticism

This post is about fan negativity towards the Keeper of the Lost Cities series.  Before I continue, yes, fans have a right to share their feelings.  The problem is that the negative fans drown out the fans who just want to have enjoyable discussions about the books.  This is a moderator issue.  Moderators could rein in the negativity.   

I am so thankful that I stayed off of all the Keeper forums during the month that I read the series for the first time.  They would have ruined it for me.  The forums are an echo chamber, and people like me won't post because we get tired of being downvoted for daring to say something positive.

Most annoying are the disparaging statements directed at Shannon Messenger.  Here's one example.

There was a post about who Sophie's father is.  Someone wrote, "I don't think even Shannon Messenger knows yet, hence the delay and the release of yet another 'filler' book."  Someone else responded, "Hmm, that's actually interesting.  I wonder if she looks at fan theories and decides from there."

These are astonishing remarks.

Sophie's father's identity is central to the entire story arc of the series and clues to his identity have been meticulously placed through the books.  It is disrespectful to Shannon to suggest that she has no idea.  She even said in an interview several years ago that she knows who Sophie's parents are.  While the Keeper books have some flaws, Shannon is a talented writer who spent a year working out the series premise before she began writing the first book.  I have no doubt that she knew who Sophie's parents are before she began writing the first book.

Some fans say that the series has been ruined in recent books and that Stellarlune is particularly boring and pointless. 



I enjoyed Stellarlune as much as I did the rest of the books.  The story does progress in Stellarlune, including some obvious clues as to Sophie's father's identity.  Of course, these same fans say that the part of the book with the clues is the most boring part, which means they missed all the clues.

These fans say that the series is just a money grab and that the only reason the series hasn't ended is because Shannon needs to keep the money coming in.  Actually, the Keeper of the Lost Cities books will not go out of print after the series ends.  The series is also steadily gaining in popularity, so the books will continue to sell.  Warner Brothers recently purchased the movie rights.

These fans more specifically say that Book 8.5 is a money grab.  They also say that the upcoming Book 9.5 is another money grab. 

Okay.  Shannon has stated that the Keeper of the Lost Cities books only show Sophie's point of view.  All books are from Sophie's perspective only.  The purpose of Book 8.5 was so that Shannon could include Keefe's point of view.  The purpose of Book 9.5 will be to show Keefe's point of view while he was in the Forbidden Cities.

Fans say that Shannon should just include Keefe's POV in the main series, but Shannon doesn't want to do that.  It's her series and her prerogative.

When I wrote my post about the cover art reveal for #9.5 Unraveled, I decided not to mention the negativity.  When the cover dropped, fans immediately began complaining.  It was just one complaint after another. 

The Unraveled cover is attractive.  What else does it need to be?

They said that the cover wouldn't attract someone who saw it in a store.  Um, I don't think beginning the Keeper series with #9.5 would be a good idea, so the attractiveness of the cover art to random people is irrelevant.  People new to the series ought to begin with #1.

Fans also say that the cover art for #9.5 looks AI-generated.

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I don't get it.  I wish that I could find people who think like I do who just want to enjoy fan discussions that aren't negative.

I understand that fans who have been reading the series for years are tired of waiting at least one year between each new book.  My perspective is different.  I'm a pretty new fan.  I began reading the books on March 13, 2023.  If the series ends with Book 10, then it will conclude in November 2025.  I am thankful that I'm getting to have at least nearly two years of fun speculating about Sophie's father's identity and Mr. Forkle's identity.  It will be different when the answers have been revealed.

I dread the fan reaction when the secrets are revealed.  These fans are so certain that Elwin is Sophie's father when he most certainly isn't.  They will have a fit!

The original fans from 2012 are quite impatient for the series to end.  They are now in their early 20s, and I suspect that most of the toxic fans are a subset of this group.  These people started reading the series when it was first published, which was when they were in middle school.  They were the age-appropriate fans from when the series debuted.  They are now in college or out in the workforce and are in the final transition to their adult lives.  They are annoyed because they still don't know the ending of a series that they started reading in middle school.

I do understand their feelings.  These are not people who will read children's books as adults.  Someone like me wouldn't have been phased by an unfinished middle-grade series that was still in progress.  After all, I started collecting Nancy Drew books when I was 19 and voraciously read vintage children's series books (Nancy Drew, Trixie Belden, Judy Bolton, etc.) when I was in my early 20s.  And I still do, as evidenced by this blog.

But these people aren't going to be adult collectors of children's books.  They want to finish transitioning to adulthood, and they want to leave the Keeper series behind.  Being annoyed about it is understandable, but some of them behave very badly while others pile on, making everyone else miserable.

For instance, someone posted at 5:56:07 one morning.  They wanted to know what others thought about Stellarlune, which they had just finished and had enjoyed reading.  At 6:08:57, someone replied, "We have all stopped caring, its [sic] kind of sad seeing the series be butchered like this but you get over it."  At 6:09:52, someone else replied, "We just don't care anymore."  Those were the first two responses, which set the tone for the thread.  

Consider that both people said that they didn't care.  So, why do they frequent the subreddit for the series when they don't care?  Why do they jump on posts, spewing their negativity?  If the series upsets them so much (and it clearly does), then why do they obsess over it?  Their behavior is unhealthy and must negatively impact their mental health. 

It would be far better for these fans to just drift away from the fandom.  If they still care after the series ends, then they can read the ending.  Sometimes in life, things are left unfinished.  It would be far more healthy for these people to just let it go.

Thursday, June 20, 2024

A Quick Visit to Barnes & Noble

On June 12, I was near a Barnes & Noble store and had 30 minutes to kill.  I went inside to check the children's book department.

The Hardy Boys section is rather small.  (Remember to click on photos in order to see them better.)


It could be that there was a recent run on the Hardy Boys series, since some empty space is present on both sides of the two books.  My fear is that the demand for the Hardy Boys books is so low that Barnes & Noble only stocks a couple of books.

Nancy Drew is a little better, but the selection isn't very good.



Here is a neat metal boxed set of Baby-Sitters Club books.


I had to check on the Keeper of the Lost Cities books.  Quite a few are in stock.



I also photographed a couple of books with appealing covers and titles.  Sometime soon I plan to see if they appeal to me. 



The books are The Secret Library by Kekla Magoon and The Mystery of Black Hollow Lane by Julia Nobel.  Kekla Magoon ghostwrote the second Nancy Drew Diaries book, Strangers on a Train.

Rick Riordan's books remain quite popular.




Here's a modern Choose Your Own Adventure book.


It's good to still see a few traces of vintage series books in the stores, but it's sad that the selection is so poor.  Modern children are into different kinds of books than the ones that we loved as children.

Monday, June 17, 2024

The Girl Who Knew Too Much by Tiffany Brooks

This book was first published as Reality Gold by Dunemere Books on May 22, 2018.  The book was republished as The Girl Who Knew Too Much by Sourcebooks Fire on January 4, 2022.

Publisher's summary:

Survivor meets Lord of the Flies in this fast-paced adventure with fascinating characters and pulse-pounding tension.  You think it's a game?  Think again.

High school senior Riley Ozment is desperate to change her reality after making a fool of herself on social media.  She needs to do something drastic to repair her social standing—like trying out for a Survivor-style reality TV show.  Suddenly, Riley's dropped onto a deserted tropical island with nineteen other teens competing for a million dollars and a rumored treasure lost on the island.

But that treasure has a history: a local curse says that seven people need to die before the treasure can be found.  And six hunters have already lost their lives in the search.  Now the question is: who will be the seventh?

With a cast of vivid characters who will stop at nothing to win the show, a cursed island setting, and a priceless treasure waiting to be discovered, The Girl Who Knew Too Much pitches readers right into a scheming web of lies, love, and betrayal.

A fast-paced new thriller where allies may not be who they say they are and legends abound, perfect for fans of young adult mystery and suspense!

Since this book features a reality show competition with 20 contestants, it has lots of characters.  There are way too many of them, but that is unavoidable given the premise.  It helps once most of them are eliminated.  However, I didn't know what most of them looked like, so I had no clear visual image for most of them.  That took away from my enjoyment.

This book is a bit slow at times.  As published, the book is very good.  If it had been shorter with less of the everyday type content, then it would have been an excellent story.  However, readers who enjoy reading slower-paced stories might find this to be an excellent book.

Friday, June 14, 2024

Dana Girls #6 The Circle of Footprints Glossy Internal Illustrations

The early Dana Girls books have glossy internal illustrations.

Click on each image in order to see it at a higher resolution.

Glossy frontispiece used from 1934 to 1942:


Glossy internal illustration used from 1934 to 1937:


Glossy internal illustration used from 1934 to 1937:


Glossy internal illustration used from 1934 to 1937:


Tuesday, June 11, 2024

More Keeper of the Lost Cities Thoughts and Speculation

Even though I haven't read the Keeper books since my third read-through ended in November, I continue to think about them.  I love theories, and I love discussing them.  This post contains my current thoughts.

STOP READING unless you have read through the entire series including #8.5 and #9.

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My opinion about the identity of Sophie's father has not changed.  I still believe that Kenric is Forkle and that he is also Sophie's father.

If you haven't read my past posts, then you can find them here.

Keeper of the Lost Cities Summaries, Reviews, and Theories

My opinion about Kenric and Fintan colluding together to fake their deaths in the Everblaze has shifted for now.

This is what I wrote previously in my post More on the Forgotten Secrets:

What happened when Kenric probed Fintan's mind?  Could Kenric have made a deal with Fintan?  My thinking is that Fintan and Kenric had some kind of agreement that ultimately resulted in Fintan and Kenric faking their deaths at Oblivimyre.

The one thing I've struggled with is that Fintan would know that Kenric is alive.  I've since realized that since Kenric is a Washer, he would have simply erased Fintan's memory right after they escaped the flames.

I've been mulling this over, and I currently feel that both Kenric and Fintan faked their deaths with no knowledge of what the other one did.  There's obviously a secret about what happened when Kenric probed Fintan's mind in the Forgotten Secret.  I thought that Kenric and Fintan made a deal.  Later, it becomes apparent that Kenric learned about Elysian and/or stellarlune from probing Fintan's mind.

From my post The Chronological Order of the Forgotten Secrets:

Stellarlune, Page 239:  "Have you ever heard of Stellarlune?"  "Stellarlune?" Fintan repeated, dragging out the syllables.  "Can't say that I have."

Later in the book, Mr. Forkle makes this remark.

Stellarlune, Page 291:  "Stellarlune," Mr. Forkle repeated, dragging out each syllable.  "You'll have to forgive me—sometimes the abundance of strange terms gets the better of me.  Stellarlune is one of Lady Gisela's projects, isn't it?"

I wrote in that post, "Mr. Forkle is definitely playing dumb by dragging out the syllables in 'stellarlune.'  He's heard of it."  Fintan is playing dumb as well.  Ah, these former Councillors and their games..."   

I suspect that Kenric gleaned some information about Elysian and/or stellarlune from Fintan when he probed Fintan's mind and that they did not necessarily make a a deal with each other.  However, I don't rule it out.

I mull over Kenric/Forkle being Sophie's father pretty much all the time.  It is fascinating how most fanswho are active in online discussionsthink that Elwin is Sophie's father and very few of them see Kenric as a possibility.  These fans take everything that Forkle has said to Sophie as true.  I believe Mr. Forkle has lied just about every time Sophie has asked about her father.

Ironically, I believe that Mr. Forkle is telling the literal truth in this passage.

Neverseen,
Page 367   "I'm not who you think I am."  "Who does she think he is?" Biana asked as Fitz snatched Sophie's forms.  His jaw fell.  "He's her father."  "No, I'm not."  "Then why would you list yourself as family?"  "Because I am family.  My name is the one on her Inception Certificate.  Someone had to vouch for her existence.  And since her genetic parents couldn't reveal themselves, I took the responsibility.  Though of course I had to use an assumed identity.  But Mr. Forkle is still me."

Sophie had questioned why Mr. Forkle's name was on her Inception Certificate, and this was his explanation.  When I first read through the books, I took the word "family" as meaning "fellowship."  Everyone who is part of the Black Swan is family in terms of being in a fellowship.  However, I recently realized that Mr Forkle is outright admitting that he and Sophie are family, as in genetic relatives. 

This passage is also from the same scene.

Neverseen, Page 368   "Someday you may understand," Mr. Forkle told Sophie.  "But for now I can at least assure you—as I did with your concerns about Jolie—that I am not your genetic father."  Keefe grabbed Mr. Forkle's wrist.  "He's telling the truth.  And... he actually feels kind of bad about it."

Again, Mr. Forkle is telling the literal truth, and Keefe proves it.  The Mr. Forkle speaking isn't Sophie's father, but his identical twin brother is.  Since Mr. Forkle's twin is Sophie's father, then this Mr. Forkle is Sophie's uncle.  He is family.

As I've been saying for a while, Shannon has revealed the identity of Sophie's father, yet most readers have missed it.  She's also rather directly revealed Mr. Forkle's identity.  The most obvious clue is the anagram from Kenric's full name. 

Kenric Elgar Fathdom rearranges to form the phrase "Forkle grin and teach."  "Grin" is Kenric and "Leto" is teach.  Therefore, "Forkle grin and teach" means "Forkle, Kenric, and Leto."

Shannon very obviously modeled plot devices and names after the Harry Potter series.  The name Cassius was styled after Lucius Malfoy, for instance.  Both Cassius and Lucius are unpleasant characters.  There are other really obvious examples.

Back to the anagram, it was also styled after the Harry Potter series.  "Tom Marvolo Riddle" rearranges to form "I am Lord Voldemort."  So of course, Shannon did the same with her mysterious leader of the Black Swan.

I had wondered last year why Shannon placed such an obvious plot spoiler in Kenric's name and in such an early book in a series that we now know will contain at least 12 volumes (#1-10 plus #8.5 and #9.5).  After I learned that Shannon originally thought that the series would end with three books, I understood why such an important spoiler was placed in the third book.  She wanted to include that clue before the series ended.  It's interesting how that spoiler has been missed by most fans.