Thursday, November 17, 2016
Twilight Darkness #16 Drawing the Dead, #17 Storm Child, and #18 Watery Grave
The climax of the story where Cynthia does what she can to get rid of the evil spirit does not make sense. Of course this type of story never makes sense, but I don't understand why what Cynthia does should solve the problem.
Additionally, I did not like this story very much.
I enjoyed this book, although it took several chapters to get into it.
In Twilight Where Darkness Begins #18, Watery Grave, Julie sees the name Lavinia in her Spanish book, then it disappears. A sea captain keeps appearing in the mist, calling out Lavinia, as though Julie is Lavinia. Julie learns of the sunken ship Lavinia and of the ship's missing captain, who is now a spirit that haunts the area.
The spirit is mentioned in a legend about a sea creature that forces a woman to join him forever as his love. Almost too late Julie learns that she is the object of the kelpie's desire.
This book is not written well. The story idea is good, but it is poorly executed. The story drags at times. Too many words are used to describe certain situations. Some startling scenes are described in a roundabout way that takes away from the emotional impact. I don't want to read every detail about every piece of furniture in the room when I want to know why somebody screamed! I don't care about the furniture!
The first part of the book is rough, but the later part of the story is excellent in spite of the flaws.